Possible Ending

Ok... This IS WAYYYY to fast. I know this. lol but I'd just thought I'd put it up anyway... rather than ending the way we have done we have like a pan around the ninjas in the car park before the hitman walks into the camera drawing his gun --- as he walks INTO the camera it cuts to black as he walks over it.

I was only considering this as it seems we have a bit of an odd situation where we had it all lined up when he goes to the door... but then we see the ninjas... how I don't know ... I know we want to see behind them looking in ... so i prepose this kinda shot. Its hard to show you without actually having the timing there so I'll attempt to explain it in WORDS :s

First bit through the legs is a realisation so should be slow ... let the audience take it in and you see a ninja just step forward just by a crack his neck (this is from a distance)
Secondly once through the hitman's legs the camera pans right quick quickly (the through the hole shot may WELL be cut... i'm liking it less and less). Its a quick spin around the space between the front door (which the hitman is now taking a step out of to get a better view) and the ninjas themselves.
Once it reaches the ninja up the top of the telephone wire the camera slows down. Still focusing on the hitman and characters below (ninja up here out of focus) you see the ninja draw a sword as the camera moves with this.... it speeds up again as he finishes drawing it....
Back to street level...
We see the crowd drawing closer to the hitman and we see the hitman look left and right.... then he moves forwards ... camera moves into him.... as he draws his gun. and cut to Black.



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Now watch the film (bad timing)...please note... N Stands for Ninjas

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It was a TINY render - only 2mb :p