Friday, 12 March 2010

Bulletin

Amigos! don't fret I'm working on the jobs I was set and I'm halfway done, but I just had a little tea break and while chomping on some toast my mind turned to something that came up in our presentation yesterday.

I know we plan to do a news report or some papers in a briefcase to establish who the target is and why people are out to kill him, so I thought this up and thought I'd share it with you guys. I know the scripting is mainly up to Dan and Sam but I think something like what I've written would solve our problem and appease Mike and Double D while we're at it.

BULLETIN:
States Attorney Regonald Egan is believed to have gone into hiding, fearing for his life after his campaign on organised crime in the city came to a startling conclusion yesterday.

Egan had promised to `clean up` the city and free it from the grip of several high end drug and
racketeering organisations by seeing that the leaders of these groups would be brought to justice
in a court of law.

While some low ranking liutenants were tried and convicted, all three of the suspects believed to
have been in charge of these criminal operations were cleared of all charges.

Police officials refuse to comment on the wherabouts of the States Attorney or the circumstances
regarding his dissapearance however, due to the reported death threats Mr Egan recieved leading up to the trial it is safe to assume he has gone to ground...


It can be worked over and re-written or whatever but I think something like this says everything we need to say. Let me know what you think, or just brainstorm some ideas of your own or any improvements on this.

JC.

3 comments:

  1. ok yeh... sounds good! I like it a lot. I rekon it should be on a news report in the background when getting introduced to the target. This its pretty cool though. And don't be silly if anyone has any problems or anything with ths story we'll discuss as a group - its a team not a dictatorship.

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  2. Cool, I spoke to Sam about working the voice into the background while it pans over the newspaper with a headline and his picture or somesuch. we'll chat to you about it on Monday or something.

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  3. That sounds pretty cool, plus it allows props to play more of a role instead of just being dressing for the rooms.

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