Just read over Sams post, I think it's got some strong points like the van blocking his shot but I don't think that this whole thing will take up two minutes. I like where your going with the ending being an accident too.
I got a rant and an idea on the protector angle over at my blog for anyone who's interested.
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I dunno i was worried it would go over. Once the opening titles are finished all the other stuff has to happen and it will take a while to introduce the pizza boy etc...
ReplyDeleteYo, um just wanted to ask what is stopping the hitman from kicking the door in and getting to his target
ReplyDeleteA wasteman like you lol.
ReplyDeletelol ill remember this
ReplyDeleteWe should act it out to see how long it would take...Ferhan can be the target
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