Enter the cleaner

1 : Hitman crashes through the door, low angle (suggests heroism)

2 : Overshoulder shot of the hitman hurling a throwing knife toward the target

3/4 : Close up of the knife travelling with force toward the targets eye/ However it sails right past (trick of perspective)

On this second page the 1st and 2nd panels need to change places

5/6 : Wide shot of the room to establish where the next part of the scene takes place the target stumbles/ and falls on his arse

7/8 : Low shot down at the targets level/ Hitman enters from the left but the targets eyeline shows us his approach even before he appears.

9 : POV from the hitman looking down as the target crawls backwards

10/11 : Target backs up and bumps into something/ A hand falls over his shoulder surprising him.

12 : Camera zooms out quickly revealing a pile of bodies behind the target. (We should show a dead dude half in through a window and a removed ceiling panel as well to show where they have come in from)

13/14 : Reverse the angle so there is just a suggestion of the pile of bodies in the foreground, the target dashes over to his would-be bodyguard/ and latches onto his leg

15 : Camera circles above and the hitmans PDA goes off in his pocket and he reaches for it as he tries to pry the target off his leg

16 : X-treme close up of the PDA reading something along the lines of "mission success"

Gaaaawd that took forever to upload. Ok so one thing I just noticed is I need to show the hitman firing way more shots to justify the pile of bodies in the guys room. Easy fix.

Aside from that comment on them and mention anything you think needs to change so I can have it ready for friday. Presuming that the intro is staying how I origionally boarded it then I need to sketch only a few more panels of filler and it will be done this weekend and ready for me to photoshop it and add tone so we have a nice board to use for our animatic. With the groups approval of course.