Once again Dan spoke with us and commented on a few things about our pitch. Glad I came in today to hear him say it. He mentioned how he didn't feel like he was sold to the idea that the target hadn't seen the dead bodies right next to him. For this reason he commented on how we could change it with the light. Perhaps the light is too dark within the room to see properly or our hitman takes out the light or lamp next to the target at the same time as the beer can moment.
This means our camera angles will be working with the light coming from the television as well as the window that he is getting shot at through.
The final scene means that we will have to work with the light again - as he bursts in the door he will first of all have a silhouette almost and then a couple of shots from his gun/throwing knife with the character standing there shaking. *thud from behind the target as a body falls* and you zoom back to see the pile of bodies behind him.
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Dude we are on a crazy similar wavelength, In the boards I did today I've marked and noted bits we'll have to tweak the lighting.
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